What is a blog for, if not to be self-indulgent? Especially in a weekend post. In this spirit, I present to you: 5 Things You Might Not Know About Me:

1) I have a recurring dream in which I'm friends with Jennifer Aniston and Brad Pitt.

2) My current TV obsession is watching reruns of the Dick Van Dyke Show.

3) My favorite curse is "mother f*cker." I know it's offensive, but I can't help it.

4) I am fairly certain I don't get the recommended daily allowance of any nutrient or vitamin, pretty much ever.

5) I really like to gamble.

Don't be shy. What 5 things might I not know about you?

Link-o-rama Today is a day of reflection as we look back upon the terrible events of 9/11, eight years ago.

Reading Underground - The subway remains an "unconnected" place. And so, New Yorkers read. via @mitaliperkins

Pug in my Computer – Something happy to remind you how nice life can be (via @ParkerXL)

The Elusive Fifty Percent - In marketing, about 50% of your ad campaign will work. But for an author marketing their own work (now an essential part of the publishing process) how do they know what to concentrate on? (via @jamesscottbell)

Writing with a Knife - A timely post from Copyblogger since I'm currently taking a machete to my manuscript (via @D_E and @thecreativepenn)

North Carolina Writer's Police Academy - One of these days I'll have to go to a writer's police academy. For now it seems unnecessary since my book(s) are set in 1678.

I found this amusing video on Persia Walker's blog. It was made by Brad Meltzer (author of loads of books):

Finally, I'll leave you with this quote from Anne Frank:

"Despite everything, I believe that people are really good at heart."

Have a reflective day and take the time to do something thoughtful for another or even yourself. Kindness is sometimes in short supply.

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Awhile ago, someone on Twitter suggested aspiring writers create a mock version of the cover of their novel. I never did because it didn't seem like such a useful exercise. Yesterday, however, I decided to give it a shot.

Boy, was I wrong! Just seeing this cover makes me feel all happy inside, and motivated to make it a reality. I should've done this a long time ago.

When the day comes that I have an actual book with an actual cover, there will be dancing in the streets.

As you know, I'm in the process of editing the first draft of my novel. Wow–it's much harder to do than writing the first draft. I find my brain is constantly overwhelmed, almost to a state of numbness. Could it be I'm just obsessing too much at this point and should be concentrating on smoothing out the story instead of agonizing over every. single. word?

One of the more challenging aspects of this task is figuring out how and where to incorporate back story and description. For example, I've edited my first chapter to within an inch of its life. I even said to Mick, "This is really good!" Then I re-read it (again) and found that every other paragraph consisted of long, drawn out descriptions. Um, how could I have missed that during all those hours of re-writing?

I do not consider myself a visual learner (I'm not exactly sure what kind of learner I am) but I realized I needed some kind of visual tool to guide me in weaving description and back story into my narrative.

I got some highlighters and a paperback I didn't mind defacing and highlighted description in green and back story in pink:

Highlight_book

The photo above is just a random page in the first chapter, but it gives you an idea of how much this author describes people/things and how she includes back story.

I think it's important to pick books in your genre for this exercise (especially in my case since mystery/crime tends to stick to a fairly strict structure). I'd also do it with a book you've already read since this is a tedious process that takes a lot of enjoyment out of reading the story itself.

The next task is to go back to my manuscript and highlight description and backstory the same way I did with the book. Is there too much pink or green? Can I figure out a more effective way to weave in the back story?

Obviously, every writer is going to incorporate these elements in a different way and my aim isn't to duplicate another writer's method. However, since I'm still learning the process, exercises like this are a good way to illustrate the way novels are structured. Of coures you don't have to do it only with back story and description. Try highlighting dialogue or simply all the times you write "said." It will give you an idea of whether or not you are overusing certain words.

What tips and tricks have you used to help you in the writing process?

Monday_goal Over the weekend I came to the sudden realization that time is running out for me.

In November, I'm going to a writer's conference in Boston, during which I've committed to a meeting with an agent and a 5-page manuscript critique. For this I will need, if not a polished manuscript, a fairly good start at one. Right now, I'm nowhere close.

I'd like to get my second draft finished by October 10. I have about two days per chapter for editing between now and then. Considering it took me three months to get to Chapter 3, this is a lofty goal indeed.

By next Sunday (9/19), I need to be finished editing Chapter 7.

I've settled into an editing routine that is more or less working for me. I read a chapter to get a rough idea of what I'm dealing with (i.e. how bad is it?) then I read it again, this time writing down key things that need to be edited to make the chapter makes sense and jives with the rest of the novel. Sometimes this means I add passages, sometimes it means I delete, sometimes it means I move sections to different parts of the chapter or to add it to a different chapter altogether.

Sometimes it means I just sit at my desk drooling or pulling my hair out.

It feels very much like I'm putting a puzzle together. There are all these elements that exist and now it's my job to put them together so they make a pretty picture.

I leave you with this video about editing a novel. Lara Zielin's debut novel, Donut Days, came out last month and the video is a fun take on her experiences with the road to getting published:

Yesterday, people on Twitter were posting pics of their workspace. Here's mine:

Desk 

In the last few weeks I've tried to make it as comfortable and clean as possible (I do spend a large portion of my day here, so it helps if it's organized). My favorite thing in it is the picture above the desk: it's a David Hockney print of his two dachshunds.

I recently added something I've wanted to have for a long time:

Chandelier

It's just an inexpensive chandelier from IKEA, but I love it!

See my poor little bookcase in the corner? Doesn't hold a candle to Neil Gaiman's library, but I'm working on it!

Link-o-rama In an effort to keep a more organized blog schedule, I've decided to give each day of the week a different subject. Friday is, you guessed it: Link Day!

To start us off, I'd like to revisit a post about Twitter I wrote awhile back:

Why I Tweet (and You Should Too) - I've been active on Twitter for about 8 months now and I've found it a valuable information resource and networking tool. Say what you'd like, I wouldn't have any of the writing contacts I have now without it. Choose who you follow carefully and you will find a great group of people who share your interests.

If You Give a Girl a Pen - This group of female writers are at different points in their writing careers and all give great insight, tips, links, etc.

Make the Most Out of a Writer's Conference - The name of this link speaks for itself, and as someone who will be going to a few writer's conferences this year, I found the information helpful. (via @WritersDigest

Grammar Girl: How Many Spaces After a Period? - This has been hotly debated by me and a couple of my friends. I learned to type on a manual typewriter many moons ago and of course back then the rule was to use 2 spaces.  Has that changed?

Eye on Books with Bill Thompson
Interview with Joseph Finder, author of Vanished, the book I'm currently reading (and loving)

Lately I've been treating myself to a bouquet of flowers every two weeks or so. Mick's a great husband, but if I had to wait for him to buy me flowers I'd never have any at all. So I buy them myself and everyone's happy.

I've found that I can make them last that long or even more by replacing the water, picking off dead bits, and throwing out the flowers as they wilt. Today's bouquet was purchased at Costco and it's very cheerful and yellow.

Large_bouquet

Whenever I arrange flowers in a vase, I think of my friend Doris, who died last year at age 91. She'd buy herself flowers every week and spend a good deal of time arranging them. She'd get frustrated when she'd come to my house and find flowers that I'd just stuck in a vase (I never used to separate them out–I figured whoever arranged them knew what they were doing, right)? Now I take the time to cut them down and re-arrange them into at least two vases, one large (above) and one small (below).

Small_bouquet

Speaking of Doris, one of these days I'll write about her in more detail. She had the most interesting life of anyone I've ever known. But I never thought I could do her justice, so I haven't written about her here. I miss her every day though.

Now for a subject change. In the fall I'll be going to a couple of writer's conferences and one thing I lacked at the last conference I went to was business cards. I didn't want anything fancy, just a card that gives my name and contact information. I turned to Etsy, because I knew they had a number of graphic designers selling their services. The one I chose was Bean Sprout Studio. I am so pleased with the results:

Card 

For $40, I got the design and 100 business cards printed. The quality is great! I would highly recommend this seller for any graphic design work you need.

I can't believe September is here already. I'd better get back to work!

Since I returned from London, I've suffered a productivity crisis the likes of which I haven't seen since the days when I dreamed of writing a novel but never did anything about it. Kind of ironic since that trip was meant to be inspirational, don't you think? It was frustrating being in a place where I desperately wanted to write (or edit in this case) but did everything I could possibly think of to distract myself from actually doing it.

I've talked about using a timer as a productivity tool but I'd gotten out of the habit of using one to keep me working. When I simply could not stand my inability to write even one sentence in a given day (or even open up Word to look at my manuscript) any longer, I went back to my trusty timer and set it for 30 minutes. Yup. For 30 minutes I could do nothing but work on my manuscript, but at the end of that time I could do whatever I wanted–make the bed, surf the net, eat a sandwich, whatever. After sufficient time wasting, I set the timer for 30 more minutes and the cycle begins again, then again, and so forth.

It might sound silly, but I get solid work done this way. I'm hoping that eventually I'll be able to stop playing games with myself in order to be productive, but until then it's ready, set, write.

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